Narrative Writing

On one hot summer day Anna and James went to the zoo. First they saw big Elephants and very loud Monkeys, the monkeys were jumping on very hot rocks. The Elephants were jumping for the colourful balloons in the air, as soon as they landed they landed like big huge airplanes landing on the runway.

The Monkeys were crying for lemons then Anna said to James “I never knew monkeys like lemons.” Anna and James were too busy looking at the monkeys they forgot about the Elephants then the Elephants were very sad they ran away when the zookeeper left the gate open, the Elephants ran in this big huge bush.

When Anna and James were finish feeding the monkeys they decided to go take a look at the big, giant, fat, Elephants when they went to look at the Elephants they saw that the gates were open they had a feeling that the Elephants had escape when they saw that the big, fat, giant Elephants were gone they were in shock.

Later on in the day Anna and James were crying that the Elephants were gone because that was their favorite animal then when James looked up he saw the big, fat, giant Elephants he said to Anna “LOOK IT’S THE BIG, FAT, GIANT ELEPHANTS” Anna though that James was lying, then the Elephants big feet was stomping on the ground and making big noises.

Anna was so HAPPY that the Elephants were back where they belong and she said to the Elephants “I will never leave you big, fat, giants ever again. Then when they were driving back home there was a big storm it went on until they got home then it stopped Anna said “that was weird”, then they went inside their house and they were calm after a big storm. In the end they had a wonderful, fabulous silent cool night.